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AllieGurl


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Sorry if this is in the wrong area, I wasnt sure where to post this!


I need some ideas! I am trying to find some kind of saying or phrase that is winter related for my advertising for my store but ISNT holiday themed.

Any suggestions? Parts of poems , funky ideas welcome!!!

TIA!

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AllieGurl already knows she can't advertise without placing an ad in the forum. Her shops are located in California, so you don't need to PM her for her store information. She does not have online sales.


Just thought I would spare AllieGurl the trouble.



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hmmm... I'm just thinking something along the lines of it's cold so you need to buy clothes to stay warm....


Baby it's cold ouside! Let us help you layer and you'll be toasty in no time...


Warm up fashionably this winter!


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D wrote:

hmmm... I'm just thinking something along the lines of it's cold so you need to buy clothes to stay warm....


Baby it's cold ouside! Let us help you layer and you'll be toasty in no time...


Warm up fashionably this winter!


...


 




Those are cute!

What do you think of this one ..

"To the midnight sky a sunset glow...." Awaken early to shop with us for our after thanksgiving sale.



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AllieGurl wrote:


"To the midnight sky a sunset glow...." Awaken early to shop with us for our after thanksgiving sale.




hmm... I think it needs to be a bit punchier... maybe more motivating vs. soothing.


Snap out of your food coma and get your butt to our store first thing in the morning! just kidding


ummm...


is it technically called "our after thanksgiving sale?"


 



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also, is the sale a Black Friday sale?


We'll make it worth your while to be in style at our After Thanksgiving Sale!


Arrive early for the best selection at the best prices!



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D wrote:

also, is the sale a Black Friday sale?


We'll make it worth your while to be in style at our After Thanksgiving Sale!


Arrive early for the best selection at the best prices!




Ok now thats cute!!!!!!!

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AllieGurl wrote:


D wrote:



also, is the sale a Black Friday sale?



We'll make it worth your while to be in style at our After Thanksgiving Sale!



Arrive early for the best selection at the best prices!






Ok now thats cute!!!!!!!


the copy you had was pretty, but I didn't feel motivated, do you know what I mean? With all the competition you'll have for shoppers, spelling out what's in it for them "we'll make it worth your while" and creating a sense of urgency "arrive early" [while we still have things on the racks because the sale's so good there will be nothing left by the time you get there]" will help grab and hold their attention.


hth


 



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